Minor changes to the feel of certain cities.

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@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ An old culture mostly left to itself to develop on its own. Through many past wa
 
 \subsection{Geography}
 
-A mostly cold and dry place with exceptions. The Mount Cardamom is known to be very hot nearby due to geothermic heat, but is also known to be very cold and dry at the top during the winter. Very few things grow due to the rocky and alkaline soil. 
+A mostly cold and dry place with exceptions. The Mount Cardamom is known to be very hot nearby due to geothermic heat, but is also known to be very cold and dry at the top during the winter.
 
 \subsection{Demographics}
 
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ Surrounded by Rolling hills out in an otherwise grassy field. A small city made
 Small shops drive the economy here. 
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-A highly superstitious culture. There's a festival which honours the dead through dance and music. The food mostly consists of chicken, root and green vegetables, and grain. The architecture is wooden, and the roads are paved with gravel. The guitar is a common instrument here. 
+A highly superstitious culture. There's a festival which honours the dead through dance and music. The food mostly consists of chicken, root and green vegetables, and grain. The architecture is wooden, and the roads are paved with gravel. The guitar and fiddle are common instruments here. 
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 The main focus of government here is the maintenance of social services, like the hospital. 
@@ -172,13 +172,13 @@ The main focus of government here is the maintenance of social services, like th
 \item [Grill]
 \item [Cafe]
 \item [Hospital]
-\item [Giant Cathedral]
+\item [Monastery]
 \end{itemize}
 }
 
 \MonCity{Vanilla City}{Fire}{$41km^2$}
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-I got lost on my way here. I did not arrive until noon. I was so happy to see the light at the end of the tunnel. Vanilla city is a strange settlement atop a mountain. You have got to travel through one of three cave entrances to get here. I had goat for lunch and dinner, with roasted broccoli. 
+I got lost on my way here. I did not arrive until noon. I was so happy to see the light at the end of the tunnel. Vanilla city is a strange settlement atop a volcanic mountain. You have got to travel through one of three cave entrances to get here. I had goat for lunch and dinner, with roasted broccoli. 
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 The geography is very mountainous. It's literally set atop a mountain. One needs to travel through cryptic caves to get here. These caves are known to flood during the rainy season. 
@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ The geography is very mountainous. It's literally set atop a mountain. One needs
 It's mostly very independent, relying on wholesale transactions when the caves are cleared up. 
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-Instead of an annual bonfire, there is an annual potluck instead. The food consists of game meat, mostly deer, and potatoes. Cycling is a common sport here. Music typically consists of chromatic harmonica, tin whistle and jaw harp. The building are made of wood and the roads are made of stone. 
+The annual bonfire in this city is the largest in the region. The food consists of game meat, mostly deer, and potatoes. Cycling is a common sport here. Music typically consists of chromatic harmonica, tin whistle and jaw harp. The building are made of wood and the roads are made of stone. 
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 The government primarily focuses on social services here and keeping the public safe from the caves.
@@ -287,10 +287,10 @@ A hilly, desolate environment. Farmland and windmills surround this small city.
 The economy is heavily influenced by the Botan Electric Company and the dairy industry.
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-The people here seem highly superstitious. While most cities have a summer festival, this city does not. Reading and gardening seem especially popular pastimes here. The large library I'm sure helps with this. The food, besides the cottage cheese and milk, seemed oddly bland. It seemed that the demographics here consist of older individuals. The guitar appears to be popular here. 
+The people here seem highly superstitious. While most cities have a summer festival, this city does not. Reading and gardening seem especially popular pastimes here. The food, besides the cottage cheese and milk, seemed oddly bland. It seemed that the demographics here consist of older individuals. The guitar and fiddle appear to be popular here. The large mausoleum is a cultural staple of the city. 
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-The government strives to provide good nutrition and social services. The nationally owned electric company provides the nearby region of Gibber with electricity in exchange for food. 
+The government strives to provide good nutrition and social services.
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 \begin{itemize}
@@ -302,7 +302,7 @@ The government strives to provide good nutrition and social services. The nation
 \item [City Centre]
 \item [Pub]
 \item [Mall]
-\item [mausoleum]
+\item [Mausoleum]
 \end{itemize}
 }
 
@@ -339,22 +339,22 @@ The government largely focuses on reducing the amount of counterfeit goods that
 \item [Butcher]
 \item [Mall]
 \item [Grocer]
-\item [Sewer dungeon]
+\item [Steel Tower]
 \end{itemize}
 }
 
 \MonCity{Basil City}{Radio}{$112km^2$}
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-It was raining by the time I arrived in Basil City around 3 PM. I could not believe the scope of this place. Even bigger than Paprika City. It rained very hard. I spent three nights at the inn, as I had a long ride ahead of me. At least it will be a long decline. Chicken and mashed potatoes for lunch, roasted broccoli with salmon for dinner, and oatmeal for breakfast.  
+It was raining by the time I arrived in Basil City around 3 PM. I could not believe the scope of this place. Even bigger than Paprika City. It rained very hard. I spent three nights at the inn, as I had a long ride ahead of me. At least it will be a long decline. Chicken and mashed potatoes for lunch, pickled asparagus with a hamburger for dinner, and oatmeal for breakfast.  
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-The biggest city in Botan. A huge city on the rocky border. Very similar to Paprika City. 
+The biggest city in Botan. A huge city on the rocky border. Neon lighting fills the night. Wooden structures but with roads paved with asphalt.  
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 A huge shopping centre with all kinds of imported goods from all over the world. Logistics also plays a very large role overall in the economy. The Botan Electric Company headquarters. 
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-There's an annual potluck here. Football is the most played sport and a common pastime. The roads are paved with cobblestone and gravel. Residences are made of wood, while commercial buildings, especially the tall ones, are made of steel and concrete. Music typically consists of harmonica, accordion, drum kits, guitar, guitalele, ukulele and banjo. 
+There's an annual potluck here. Football is the most played sport and a common pastime. The roads are paved with asphalt. Residences are made of wood, while commercial buildings, especially the tall ones, are made of steel and concrete. Music typically consists of harmonica, drum kits, guitar and lots of brass. 
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 The government works hard to provide social services to the people, while cracking down on counterfeit goods and currency. 
@@ -383,10 +383,10 @@ The government works hard to provide social services to the people, while cracki
 
 \MonCity{Nutmeg City}{Water}{$84km^2$}
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-The hot but humid climate, fresh salty air. Blue skies and blue water, contrasted by the orange-copper ceramic roof tiles and white house bodies. Overall, a very silent place, aside from the crashing waves near the shore and chirping birds. I arrived around midnight, after a brutal bike ride. I had toast and coffee for breakfast. a lemon dill salmon fillet for lunch with roast carrots and potatoes. I had leftovers for dinner.  
+The cool but humid climate, fresh salty air. Blue skies and blue water, contrasted by the orange-copper ceramic roof tiles and white house bodies. Overall, a very silent place, aside from the crashing waves near the shore and chirping birds. I arrived around midnight, after a brutal bike ride. I had toast and coffee for breakfast. a lemon dill salmon fillet for lunch with roast carrots and potatoes. I had leftovers for dinner.  
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-Sweeping hills and sandy beaches. Hot and humid. Very densely populated overall with a large diversity of people. 
+Sweeping hills and sandy beaches. Cool and humid. Very densely populated overall with a large diversity of people. 
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 Very largely run by the logistics industry. Lots of shops selling all kinds of goods. The densest city in Botan by population.